As far the name thing -- with the Sailor Moon influence, I can see how it would be distracting, and if it doesn't fit with the world, maybe you can alter it a bit to something similar-sounding but more appropriate?

XD Flanitors. I feel kinda bad for them! They just want to keep the place clean!

Haha, FF games are so bad at stealth.

Team Emotion-Avoidant.

LMAO.

LIGHTNING DOESN’T BELIEVE IN BEING CALM AND COOL.

roflll. SHE ONLY BELIEVES IN PUNCHES.

Wow, nice, Snow, hitching a ride on the air unit! That was pretty cool.

haha, I am always sort of impressed when Snow actually manages to be cool, and then sort of grumpy about being impressed.

you have an amazing knack for saying completely the wrong thing to the poor kid.

Does it make me a terrible person that I loved this bit? Hahahaha, oh Snow. You FOOL. I love how deeply, deeply dense he is.

SLAPFIGHT.

I loved this, too! "You sound exactly like Snow. And he didn't hit me!" Haha, Fang, don't compare her to Snow. Seriously. "It didn't change anything." "Tell that to my jaw." How awesome is it how much of the cutscenes consist of discussions between awesome ladies?

Snow’s got this one… RIGHT IN THE FACE

LMAO

I thought Hope's dad was totally awesome and just did not understand at all why Hope doesn't like him.

VANILLE AND SAZH ARE ADORABLE I DON’T WANT AWKWARD AND UNHAPPY TIMES.

YES ;_;

His crystal form looks different than Serah’s.

That really weirded me out, too!

And the chocobo song with lyrics was stuck in my head FOREVER after that bit.